Sunday, October 18, 2015

Paragraph Analysis 2

In this blog post, I will provide a link to the paragraph analysis of my rough draft and discuss it briefly.

Altmann, Gerd. "Problem Analysis Solution". 10/15 via Pixabay. CC0 Public Domain License.


By doing this activity, I learned that my organization is overall a pretty big strength. I feel like everything flows together although I could do better on my transitions. The main points were usually identified but perhaps not in the best or most interesting way. There's always room for improvement with that but overall I think my essay is in pretty good shape.

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