Identifying Basic Grammar Patterns

Here is a link to my longest paragraph in my QRG with basic grammar patterns identified.

Macintosh, Scott. "I Want YOU To Use Grammar". 7/14/11 via Deviant Art. Attribution 3.0 License.

After identifying some grammar patterns I have in the longest paragraph of my QRG, I realize that my writing is kind of boring structurally. I had to change a few sentences to add some variety in sentence patterns and also revise a little more to make it more interesting. So the main thing I figured out is to remember to make it engaging and different in structure so the paragraph has better flow. That's what I'll be working on.